Saturday, 8 February 2020

Out Of The Coma And Into His Mother 1 & 2




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  1. Damn, what a situation. I could totally see something like this happening if body swapping was available(assuming it outpaces medical tech that would solve similar issues).

    Only issue I have with the caption is his realization that he was the same age as his mom after being in a coma for four years. I think a good way to fix that would be to have him only be in a coma for around six months. Then state he is "46 and ten months old." Just a small plot hole! The story is still good :)

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    1. Thanks :)

      As for the plot hole, honestly I didn't even consider that when I was writing it. But... I guess he could've just been quick enough to add four to how old he knew his mother was when he went into his coma.

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  2. Awesome. This would be a great series to see what happens.

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